Saturday, 3 December 2011

Changes to the script

Due to the complexity and difficulty behind understanding the script we decided it would be best if we updated it and made it better. The updated version of the script is as followed:

The girl is peeling an apple inside the house before the boy walks in, he then immediatly leaves. They both walk out the house with the girl leading from behind as she begins to argue.

Girl: Just walk away, is that what your going to do
Boy: I'm not
Girl: No, your just a cheat
Boy: I'm not a cheat
Girl: Yes you are
Boy: No, I'm not a cheat I'm a -
Girl: No, you are just a cheat (cutting off the boy)
Boy: And your just a stupid bitch

She then slaps him for this remark and he clenches a fist to punch her, before changing his mind and walking away.

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